Thursday, March 28, 2019
My spectacular narrative writing story structure
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A very interesting idea Jordan. I love all the opportunity you have given yourself to describe a prehistoric world with this science fiction genre you have put yourself in. The idea of the computer in detention sucking them in to the world is an interesting one. Maybe there is a way we can include some detail from that in your introduction? Maybe the page the computer was on was a website all about the Jurassic Period? (The time of the dinosaurs?). I do think we need to develop the second half of your stories ideas. Having an entire story be a dream at the end always leaves the reader feel unsatisfied, and is a sign to them that the author got stuck in thinking up a creative ending :). We can discuss this in the next writing session.
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