Kia Ora, Bloggers today I am showing you the Parody I did on William Carlos Williams poem called "This is just to say". My one is based on stealing my sister's phone. blue is the words I have Changed.
My Version Original
I Have taken I Have Eaten
The phone The Plums
That was on that were in
The table the Icebox
And wich And Wich
You were you were
Probably Probably
Using to Saving for
Tik Tok Breakfast
Forgive me
it Forgive me
was tempting they were
delicious
So It’s so sweet
Now Gone and so cold
Make Sure to comment and let me know what you think. I'll See you Next time.
Thursday, February 27, 2020
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hi Jordan,I like the way you switched the saving breakfast with Tik Tok.
ReplyDeleteYou brought me back to when i actually did that to my sister.
Maybe next time you could change more on the second paragraph.
keep up the great work. :-)
Thank you very much Joel for The nice comment.
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