Clenched - Ch.6
She laid the rest of his clothes down on the bed and her hands clenched into fists as if she was terribly angry about something.
He was so angry that he clenched his fists and went to try and punch someone.
Enforced - Ch.6
'When I make mistakes I get punished,' insisted Bruno, irritated by the fact that the rules that always applied to children never seemed to apply to grown-ups at all (despite the fact that they were the ones who enforced them).
All the rules that my mum and dad had Enforced I had to listen to
Muttered - Ch.6
'Well,' he muttered, standing up now and heading over towards the door, suddenly anxious to be away from her, 'I was only saying I didn't like it here, that's all.
The man muttered under his breath
Peckish - Ch.6
He wanted to mention that he was feeling a bit peckish right now, but instead, he looked across at Maria and realized for the first time that he had never fully considered her to be a person with a life and a history all of her own.
I’m feeling a little bit peckish at the moment
Reverberated - Ch.6
The noise of a door slamming came from downstairs and reverberated through the house so loudly - like a gunshot - that Bruno jumped (page 63) and Maria let out a small scream.
I screamed as loud as I could and it Reverberated of the walls in the room
Securely -Ch.7
The accident took place a couple of hours later after Bruno had located a suitable tire and Pavel had dragged it to the large oak tree on Gretel's side of the house, and after Bruno had climbed up and down and up and down and up and down the trunk to tie the ropes securely around the branches and the tire itself.
The ropes hadn’t been securely tied around the wheels of the bike
Exhaustion - Ch.7
. Instead, he was wearing a white vest over his trousers and his hair flopped down over his forehead in exhaustion.
John fell over in exhaustion
Incredulous- Ch.7
'I'm not allowed to say what I feel?' he repeated, incredulous.
My dad just said we had won a million dollars, incredulous
Appallingly - Ch.7
'Good morning, little man,' said Kotler, reaching out and - quite appallingly - ruffling his hand through Bruno's hair, a gesture that made Bruno want to push him to the ground and jump up and down on his head.
Someone Appallingly kicked this person for no reason
Irritation - Ch.7
'Oh, will you be quiet please,' shouted Bruno, staring at his sister in irritation.
Get out of my room yelled Tim in irritation.
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Monday, May 20, 2019
Thursday, May 16, 2019
Frozen adventure writing using the work we did on similes and metaphors
The amazing waterfall was a hydraslide heading down the arctic wasteland and the ice sticking up around the place was like world war 2 all looking like trenches. Penguins were flying around everywhere off the big icebergs like airplanes taking off beaks as sharp as javelins. The icebergs in the water were like boats lots in the middle of nowhere It was like we were on a reverse desert instead of being hot it was cold because Antarctica is actually a desert. There were also so many small mountains to climb so I had a go at first I slipped but then I regained my footing and kept on going and in time at all, I was at the top.
I stepped out of my cabin and immediately I turned into a statue my whole body completely frozen in ice I slowly slid across the ice with my feet submerged in ice then as I move along the icy plains I come across a chocolaty rock sticking out of what looked like vanilla icing. Running around everywhere were white gummy bears with little baby gummy bears. “SMASH!” The ice broke just in front of me and out came 2 sea lions their teeth were razor blades skin all rough and an angry expression on there faces I didn’t want to mess around with these guys. So I set off running for home I didn’t think the sea lions would be fast being water creatures but to my amazment, they were fast really fast and they almost got me but I just made it home with them biting at my heels.
Today I decided to go for a hike up the tallest mountain in Antarctica and on the way there was a massive crack in the ice and then all of a sudden it seemed to let go of the edge of Antarctica and flew straight down into the icy depths below now the track was blocked there was no way through and then like a majestic seal emerging out of the water the piece of ice came shooting back out bringing fish with it was raining fish.
In conclusion, Antarctica is melting because of us and we don't even care when I was talking about the water shoots that's all melted ice and in no time all the ice will be gone and the water will rise and we will drown.
Friday, May 3, 2019
Dialog Practice Enjoy
“I want to go to the Eiffel tower,” said Jay excitedly
“No way You’re getting me to go there we are going to see PSG play at Le Parc des Princes,” protested Chris packing all his favourite PSG football jerseys.
Oh well mum will come to the Eiffel tower with me and dad will go to the football game with you said Jay taking charge for the moment
“Alright sounds good,” added Chris
“Remember to bring your warm clothes cause it might be snowing while we are over there,” said Jay packing his tracksuit pants and his warm puffa jacket.
“Look at the map,” called Chris to Jay
‘Yes we need to plan where we are going,” said Jay
Wednesday, April 10, 2019
Monday, April 8, 2019
my goal ladder reflection
The black lines are where I think I am at right now Enjoy :)
I feel like I have improved in every aspect maybe more in writing because I am using paragraphs a lot more and more efficiently as well. In maths, I haven't really had a chance because we have been working more on geometry instead of fractions and decimals but I have still got a little bit better because of the weekly maths test. I have also improved in ready mainly because I am enjoying the book that I am reading so I want to do more and I am taking my time and getting as much as I can out of the book.
Thursday, March 28, 2019
My spectacular narrative writing story structure
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